Thanks a lot you guys for all the great comments and critiques. Pretty much went back to the drawing board on this one and turned it into something I feel a lot better submitting to the competition.
Special thanks to rantz for the boot in the ass and for making me realize how much potential this one really had. You rock dude.
Anyway, hope you like it, and now I can get started on my second entry.
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